Since when has size zero been
beautiful?
What is beautiful about being
unhealthily thin?
When there is nothing there but bones
and skin,
The faces of models so emotionless
they seem,
Strutting down the catwalk to a
melodic theme.
Since when has size zero been beautiful?
The fashion industry is taken too
seriously,
Not giving a thought about illness
and the severity,
Young girls idolise these models, but
why?
Losing weight for a gap between their
thighs.
Since when has size zero been
beautiful?
The media is silly and society is
mad,
Since when is a size 14 seen as so
bad?
I would like to see more models with
more width on their hips,
And go back to the “normal” time we
must have skipped.
COMMENTARY
I was inspired to write this poem after reading an article
that I had found on the internet, saying how models are too thin. I came up
with a lot of ideas about the ways in which models are presented, and why are
the certain girls chosen to present beauty and fashion. I have used the title
at the beginning of each stanza, in order to keep going back the question asked
at the start. Each stanza ia based on a different factor of models. The first
is based on models being too thin, the second stanza highlights the seriousness
of being thin and how these models have an impact on younger girls who strive
for perfection, finally, the last stanza is going back to when being skinny was
frowned upon and being a healthy size 14 was not. The poem highlights different
areas of models and the fashion world. I have used a higher frequency of lexis
in this poem, as I have tried to make it more serious and easier for
people/readers to relate to. It is a very broad topic and people have different
views, I used examples everyone can understand and interpret.
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