Autumn leaves whirling
Crunching as they are stepped on
Seasons come and go
COMMENTARY
This haiku is based on the season autumn and the imagery of
the leaves crunching as they are being stepped on, and the leaves whirling
around in the autumn breeze. I was inspired to write this haiku whilst I was
walking through the university, I was alone and it was very quiet, it gave me a
chance to take in everything that was going on around me, and what I noticed
the most was the weather. I wanted the image to be created of a typical autumn
day, and the two key concepts that autumn is associated with. I redrafted this
haiku and added the final line about seasons in order to make the haiku more
relatable and to give it another meaning as well as just focusing on autumn.
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